I am taking a giant leap posting this. This is just something I wrote last night, in about 1 minute, while I was making supper. It's just a deep thought, creative outlet. I have NEVER written a poem other than Roses are Red and I thought it was decent enough to share.
Who's gonna listen?
Who's gonna care?
Who's gonna hug you,
When nobody's there?
Who do you turn to?
Where do you go?
Who to you look to,
When you feel so alone?
All bottled up,
and ready to burst, BUT
bearing your soul,
leaves you open to hurt.
Alone in the tub,
with tissues and tears.
The only thing solved
is feelings pushed to the rear.
5 comments:
Wow...I hope the author is doing ok. Big hugs to her.
Is this to be interpreted as deep thoughts by Danica or is this how you're feeling lately? Please let me know.
Concerned,
Jennifer
I haven't checked in here to leave a comment for a VERY LONG time........mainly because we often chat about what you post!
Anyway this one deserves a repsonse(many others do to, I'm bad....always lurking).....I have to say this is pretty good, and I'm thinking you should send it to George.........just imagine!!!! WTG....TFS!!!
Very deep! Would make a good chorus for a song.
Hope you're feeling all right. I can too often relate to what the poem is all about :(
Very deep! I hope all is well with you.......
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